Antigone Cadmus

Don't put our own work down! This is good! I've read bad poems, and this is not one. Good imagery, nice symbolism. I liked it because it wasn't silly and ...

Fine, Nate. Why Augustus was great: - helped establish model of monarchy -maintained military control -made sure law courts functioned -made sure religious obligations fulfilled -received foreign emba

I did not say he did nothing. I just said I personally didn't believe he was the greatest emperor. Jeez. >_

This is short... Critique: Remove the ellipses. They are amateurish and corny (at least to me). The name slipped from him. Cyla seems like a pretty important kitty :). Both ...

Hamlet. Insanity is one of my favorite themes. And you've got to love a play where only one character is alive in the last scene. Fortinbras is interesting. He just ...

Augustus? Well, the Pax Romana took place during his reign, but he wasn't the greatest emperor...

This is very good! It is even better than the first chapter! Critique: She fell soon into what appeared to be a gran mal seizure, with every perfect detail but ...

I'm no poet, but I will review this. :) I think your an excellent writer. I've read your Elsa story. I enjoyed it more than your poetry. This isn't bad, ...

It's a bit idealistic... "Coexist" looks perfect on paper, but prejudice can never be eliminated unless the world becomes some sort of "Harrison Bergeron" Hell.

Yes, the empire was at it's maximum extent when Trajan was emperor, but I give bigger kudos to Hadrian for limiting the empire. Part of Rome's downfall was that it ...

Why isn't he hunted in human form if he's got some unusual features like blood-red eyes and an angry scar around his neck? And a new one: Do werewolves age ...

o.O. Well this is...short. But you tell the story in an interesting wat. Be brave and post more. You're grammar is fine. Maybe you could add a bit more description... ...

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Chapter two We rode the bike at city speed limits. I passed blunt directions to Adam via the microphones in our helmets and ground my teeth over the bike’s slow ...

The first review nearly took the ideas out of my mouth. You have a good concept going. It isn't like everything else. However, the Death/afterlife cliches should be gotten rid ...